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Nervous...but I need input

Postby GenesisPhreak » Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:06 am

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Postby GenesisPhreak » Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:44 am

nothin huh?
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Postby mcbc » Sat Jul 12, 2008 6:42 am

Silly rhetorical question: why don't you post the link here? Even if it's just a FB link, it's a lot easier for the lazies here.
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Postby sahjahpah » Sat Jul 12, 2008 9:14 am

fwiw, i listened but don't really feel qualified to critique it.
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Postby GenesisPhreak » Sat Jul 12, 2008 9:32 pm

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Postby GenesisPhreak » Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:44 pm

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Postby Jesus » Mon Jul 14, 2008 5:44 am

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Postby GenesisPhreak » Mon Jul 14, 2008 11:30 am

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Postby MattRyd » Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:54 am

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Postby GenesisPhreak » Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:57 am

thanks for the new input, i appreciate it. As for the sampled chorus, not at all. I wrote it all myself. I like to think my chorus' are the catchy part and my verses the thoughtful parts. The genre is still in question. I want to think of myself as an alternative artist, with a new kind of style, but that could just be wishful thinking. Thanks again.
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Postby hisnameisneb » Thu Aug 07, 2008 3:09 pm

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Postby GenesisPhreak » Thu Aug 07, 2008 3:25 pm

im intrigued by this equation. elaborate if you will.
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Postby phollens » Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:49 pm

I think he's just saying the melody/harmony that I think your going for in your rough mix is extremely close to that of Moondance..... ala :40-:52 etc....in your original piece.

Would be easier if it was tuned to hear if your following the exact same progression... but in one listen I would concur... I don't know about Oliver....

anyhoo, it's always good to sing and express yourself. Keep it up.
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Postby GenesisPhreak » Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:17 am

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Postby GenesisPhreak » Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:22 am

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